Still for Kate Gordon 2

Still featuring my character Kate Gordon (Scarlett Johansson) and Bruce Wayne (Christian Bale).This scene takes place during the events of 'The Dark Knight' (the best movie ever for me). Bruce is going to reveal his secret identity.

"Please, Bruce, don't do this."
"Many people died because of me, Kate. I must confess"
"Gotham needs Batman. I need you too. If you reveal your secret to everyone, we won't be together. But I will be loving you forever"
Kate kiss Bruce and go away crying.

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P.S. Sorry for my not good English